Crush

By: Eunicia

Email: eunicia_yu@hotmail.com


Summary: Rachel loves Jon, but Jon is falling in love with Tina. What will Rachel feel when she finds out about it?

Rated: G


It was raining heavy at night, but the S Clubbers are just having fun playing truth or dare. From the very beginning, Jon already has a secret crush on Tina. They are already beginning, but silently, they formed a circle on the floor. Then Hannah broke the silence.

Hannah: Ok, time to start, Tina you're the first one to be asked.

Tina: Okay.

Hannah: Rachel, ask her!

Rachel: Okay, Tina, truth or dare?

Tina: Umm… I choose truth.

Rachel: Alright... (Thinks for a while…) Is it true that you and Jason broke up?

Everyone remained silent for a moment.

Jon whispered to Bradley: Don't you think that's going to hurt Tina?

Bradley: I think so.

Tina: Yeah, we broke up… three months ago.

(Then her eyes started to fill with tears)

Jon: Rachel! How dare you make her cry?!

Rachel: I know... (She walks to Tina) Tina, I'm sorry, I didn't mean it…

Tina: It's okay Rach, I know you didn't mean it.

Rachel: Oh… okay.

Then Tina wiped off her tears.

Bradley: Okay, I'm next.

The rest: Okay.

Bradley: Jon, truth or dare?

Jon: Dare.

Bradley: Fine. Snog one S Club girl.

Jon walks to Tina and snogs her for 20 seconds!

Rachel: Oh my god!!!

Paul: What is it Rach?

Rachel: Oh… nothing.

Paul: You sure?

Rachel: Yeah…

Paul: Okay.

Jo: Jon? What are you doing to Tina?

Then Jon stopped snogging Tina and looks over to Jo.

Jon: Snogging her as Bradley said.

Bradley: But I didn't mean snog her for 20 seconds, ya muffin!

Hannah giggled.

Jon: Oh… sorry… (turns to Tina) Teen, sorry 'bout that…

Tina: It's okay…

Jon: Thanks.

Rachel felt heartbroken.

Hannah: It's getting late…

Paul: And almost midnight…

Jo: We better go to sleep.

Tina: Okay, night guys.

Others: Night night Teen.

They all got up and headed to their rooms. Jon shares the room with Paul and Bradley, Jo shares the room with Tina, and Hannah shares the room with Rachel.


Meanwhile at Rachel and Hannah's…

Rachel is crying.

Hannah: Rach, why are you crying? Is something wrong? Rach...

Rachel: What? What crying? I'm not crying and nothing's wrong.

Hannah: C'mon Rach, I heard you crying, I heard you cry a while ago.

Rachel: Okay, but promise not to tell anyone.

Hannah: Absolutely, so what is it?

Rachel: I think I'm falling in love…

Hannah: With?

Rachel: Jon…

Hannah: With Jon… Oh my god!

Rachel: Don't shout or the others will wake up and will come here!

Hannah: Oh… sorry... so that's why you were crying.

Rachel: What?

Hannah: The moment Jon was snogging Tina.

Rachel: Umm… yeah.

Hannah: But how did you fall in love with him?

Rachel: I don't know, okay? Let's go to bed, I'm getting very sleepy.

Hannah: Well… okay. Night Rach.

Rachel: Night Han.


The night passed, it's already morning... Tina got up first. She went to the kitchen to drink some water. Followed by Jon.

Jon: Teen, I didn't know you were here, what are you doing?

Tina: Drinking water. You… what are you gonna do?

Jon: Drink too.

The glass of water Tina was drinking a while ago was flowing a bit to the floor that makes the floor a bit wet. Then Tina walked over to the wet floor without noticing herself there. She slipped.

Jon: Tina! (Jon caught her).

Tina: Oh, thanks Jon, if you weren't there, I would have been suffering from a bone fracture by now.

Jon: It's okay. You don't have to thank me because I wanted to do it.

Tina: Okay, bye. I'm going up to my room now.

Jon: Okay... but can I talk to you for a minute?

Tina: Sure.

They went to the living room.

Tina: So… what do we need to talk about?

Jon: Umm... Tina?

Tina: Yes?

Jon kissed her on the lips for about 5 seconds.

Tina: ...Jon?

Jon: Tina… do you know what I'm talking about?

Tina: I think so… you like me… right?

Jon: Wrong... but I think there's another word for that.

Tina: What is it?

Jon: I… love… you.

Tina: Jon, you have nothing to worry about because I love you, too.

They started to passionately kiss. It seems forever. They don't want to end the kiss.


Then Rachel got up, headed down to the living room where Tina and Jon is... she saw them kissing...

Rachel: Oh my god... (she whispered to herself as she run back to Hannah).

The kiss broke.

Tina: Jon, did you hear someone whispering and crying?

Jon: No, I heard nothing.

Tina: Okay.

Jon: So, you're my girlfriend now, right?

Tina: Not yet… (She joked).

Jon: What?

Tina: Joking!!!

Jon: I thought you were serious!

Tina: Of course not! …Okay, back to room.

Jon: Okay, be careful on the stairs.

Tina: Sure.


Jo woke up. Jon went to buy a ring for Tina.

Meanwhile at Tina and Jo's...

Jo: So, what happened?

Tina: What do you mean what happened?

Jo: What happened while I was sleeping?

Tina: Nothing.

Jo: Oh, c'mon, Teen.

Tina: Ok, you promise not to tell anyone.

Jo: Promise (she said as she raise her hands up).

Tina: I'm not single anymore.

Jo: You mean you already have...

Tina: Yes.

Jo: But when did you have?

Tina: This morning.

Jo: But... who is this guy?

Tina: The blonde.

Jo: Jon!!! Oh my god!!!

Tina: Don't yell or the others will overhear us!

Jo: Sorry, Teen, I'm just so shocked that Jon is yours now. Congrats!

Tina: Thank you Jo.

Jo: You're welcome.

But Paul entered the room of Tina and Jo.

Paul: What was that scream?

Jo: Nothing.

Paul: You sure?

Tina: Yes, we're 100% sure.

Paul: Okay

Paul left the room.

Jo: That was close…

Tina: But it was your fault, you screamed.

Jo: I said I'm sorry!

Tina: Oh… let's just forget about it… But promise not to tell the others. Only you, Jon and me know about it, okay?

Jo: I said I promise! (Jo joked).

Tina: Right

Jo: Whateva...


(Bradley is still sleeping by those times)

Meanwhile @ Rachel and Hannah's...

Rachel is crying.

Hannah: what's wrong Rachel? Why are you crying again?

Rachel: I saw Jon kissing her.

Hannah: Who "her"?

Rachel: Tina!

Hannah: Oh… sorry Rach.

Rachel: No, it's not your fault. It's my fault for letting him go.

Hannah: Rach… just forget him… He's not right for you anyway.

Rachel: Maybe you're right, he's not right for me, not for me, not for me...


Meanwhile @ Jon, Brad and Paul's...

Brad's awake. Then Jon entered the room.

Brad: Yo! Mate, what happened?

Jon: What do you mean, "What happened?" ...nothing happened.

Paul: C'mon Jon, we know something happened. Tell Us.

Jon: No.

Brad/Paul: Tell!

Jon: All right, all right!

Jon showed the ring to Bradley and Paul.

Bradley: Who's that for?

Jon: For my girlfriend.

Paul: Girlfriend? Who girlfriend?

Jon: ...

Bradley: Tell!

Jon: Okay! Tina!

Paul: She's lucky that you're her boyfriend. Congrats mate.

Bradley: Yo!

Jon: What "Yo?"

Bradley: Nothing!


Jon rushed to Tina's room. Jo isn't there.

Jon: Teen!

Tina: Jon!

They hugged

Jon: I have something for you.

Tina: What is it?

Jon showed her the ring.

Tina: What a beautiful ring!

Jon put the ring on Tina's finger.

Jon: Tina, will you marry me?

Tina: Yeah Jon.


They kissed.


*** The end ***

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